>>107955332>What do you think about contraction like "she'd wear that to a ball"?That's perfectly fine.
As for yer, it's a verbal tic that does exist, but when its used it's generally as an alternate way of pronouncing you're (you are), while ya is a more natural way of pronouncing "you" in an informal manner.
The grammar in the image you posted is a lot better, by the way. The only things I'd change are as follows.
>You are a goodman, Charlie Brownshould have a space between good and man. "You're" would also sound a bit more natural than You are, but there's nothing wrong with using you are in this instance.
>You should stop stringing him along just in case schroeder didn't work out.A little bit of an awkward sentence, but the only actual issue is that "didn't" should be "doesn't", assuming she's talking about a current relationship rather than a one that no longer exists.