>>100897648It takes the flaws of both Homestuck and SU and tumblrifies them to a degree. Like SU it wants to be a character focused drama but has 'more' (with massive airquotes because only one or two concepts are actually interesting but only vaguely)things in the background. The characters have no personality and are primarily identified by their lack of normal pronouns, so it's even worse than Townie shit in that the main characters have less personality and things going for them.
And a lot of what the characters do or see or are capable of doing are just in service to agenda rather than actually making any goddamn sense.
For example, the basic premise is that aliens with no concept of gender (actually they do and they're all female because writer didn't have the balls to keep them agender and literally said they wanted no 'males' in their story) try to raise human kids to study them. They are only allowed to talk to each other briefly and are sometimes given wikipedia to read as it is one of if not the only thing from a destroyed earth that they have. Keep in mind these kids can't be older than at least 15 by the time the story starts and live in complete isolation, no movies, no pictures, no frame of reference for what other humans even LOOK like including the kids they get to talk to.
But SOMEHOW one of the kids determines that they(he) is a GIRL because of a wikipedia article. We are expected to believe that a child can comprehend the wikipedia jargon of a topic they(he) has never come into contact with or has any reference for other than a page (but cuts off after a 'it doesn't really matter lol) with rudimentary descriptions ( I read the page just to look into how badly they fucked up) that are so vague that even an adult would probably not know what the fuck it was talking about.
There are a lot of other things like this, but this is probably the biggest example of something that pissed me off in this.
