>>2340249You have a good basic structure.
The piece is a bit flat, but I've pointed out some techniques that you can use in order to make it stick out a bit more.
You seem to have a basic idea of foreshadowing, but I believe you should watch the video in order to get a full understanding of it.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=eJWLaDSNBAIAs you can see in the bottom of this picture in dark blue, I've set up a simple structure so that I could do detailed work without messing up some of the proportions. (So kind of like the skelton)
Your shoulders are bit too close to the neck for the perspective that you are going for.(Light blue) . I've brought down the shoulder a little bit away from the neck, as well as thickening his arm.
In the chest area, (pink lines). The muscles are shaped similarly to a heart, but goes down into the collarbone, shoots a bit up towards the top of the shoulders, loops down to the under arm muscles and then meets again about three finger widths above the bottom of the rib cage.
Try to avoid the "square " for the chest and abbs.
Below the pink lines. It merges into our red line representing the rib cage and abbs.
you've seem to be elongated body, it's an easy mistake that multiple people do. So don't worry too much about it.
You will get better.
I'm a bit too tired to work on the legs. Although they do seem to have a good structure.
Overall, I think that you have potential and skill.
Your art will continue to improve, so hang in there.
Nice hands by the way.
