It reads like narration, not description.>Personal taste wise I dislike "4 orcs and a chest"
I'm not going to say, "write it like Stonehell" but that would be my preference.
1. Gravel, brush, long shadows. Four 10ft cubes stacked vertically. They read, "Confess your betrayals!" Each who will not or can not are attack by 1d4-1 shadows. The shadows try to pin.
Shadow 2 HD, 0 dmg (1d3 strength drain), 12" mv, fearless morale (or 3 and test morale, in bright light or pitch dark)
2. Jade statues, east to west: Melted, disgusted by 1; Winged, fears 4; Eyeless, pities 3. Chute to room 4 looks like eye, pupil is magic healing tadpole.
3. Narrow tunnel. Telepathic scribbles convey "Worm that you are, crawl." (or "Crawl and know our hate." if read the other way).
Etchings are worth 200gp to the right a professor.>What's confusing with the incubators specifically?
What happens if you put someone in the second incubator?