Hello Again folks. Here's version 1.3 of Pioneer CYOA. Not sure if it's still considered OC, It's about a week old. I've made a couple more minor changes which I think will be the last ones. Changelog is as follows:
>A few minor changes to descriptions of things.
>Covered waggon now takes 5 passengers, giving the player a "Party Bus" option.
>The Land Officer takes a moment to explain a bit better how supernatural amps/dampeners work.
>Changes to layout and formatting to make it easier to read.
> 3 new Hazards to give more choice of what challenges to take on.
I had a look at a few tutorials on the MEGA archive on how to improve the aesthetics. Hopefully it's a bit easier on the eye now.
As always, constructive criticism is appreciated.