>>3890057I like what you’re trying to do with the piece, but posting on here is pointless if you want any decent constructive criticism or praise :P
I get what you’re trying to do with the piece and the abstraction of the figure and stuff, but I feel like if you made the stained-glassesque fractles on the figure or whatever more in line with the curves of their musculature and anatomy, that might work out better for you and make it more 3dish. If you were trying to make them appear more 2d, then the detailing you put into the face betrays that intent. Using bright colors to make the figure stand out from the foreground is good, but the pastels mixed in with the figure make the color scheme clash a bit, and the brightness of the background makes the work feel hard to focus on. When you started it felt like you were trying to do a clear study of a person, but as you went along you added lots of cool background stuff which was a lot less realistic which feels like you got bored with the idea of drawing a realistic person, which defeats the point of doing an anatomy study in the first place.
I think this is a good start, but it feels a bit nervous in its execution and taking more time to study more anatomy and not be afraid of the quality of any sketches you do is good.
