>>3860991It is good for a start Anon, I would increase the overall saturation of the image. Currently it is a quite uniform grey. We can see the shapes yes, but it can be better and more striking if you push the lights lighter and the darks darker a the place s of interest. The places you wish the viewer to focus on. There could be whichever you feel to be the focus, the air the butt the back etc.
