>>3808828>>/icThat said... It looks good but there is a huge room for improvement.
Sketching,proportions, perspective - all are lacking. I wont nag for shoe; but what happened with her right arm ?
Coloring is really nice and i can't give you any useful critique on it
Also shirt and panties are done great; folds are perfect (thought there might be too many), shirt collar is bit weird and there should be some shade between it and her skin if that is folding in that V shape
Whole image looks like a clusterfuck of average and good.