>>3769646>>3769560Op your page is confusing.
Panel 1. Establishing shot. Ok, good perspective. The goons are too stiff and they all look the same, add variety to body proportions. The girl is too small, so it's not clear what she's doing. another small panel with a close up to introduce her and show what she's doing is the best option.
Panel 2. It's not clear that this guy is dressing as superhero, we only see the boots, but maybe it was required on the script. I don't like the shot, you cut both the torso and the left foot, and from that angle we should see the floor. It seems like he's flying more than trying to keep balance.
Panel 3. Fucked up perspective, the goon is too small. The expression of the girl isn't convincing, she looks perplexed or annoyed.
Panel 4. Fucked up hand anatomy. She's supposed to be scared but it seems almost like she's gently knocking on the door. The bg is non-existent, doors have little details that make them look like doors, indentantion and such. Also there should be the door for the other bathroom on the left.
About your inking in other drawings: search pencils done by other artists and ink them.
Your lines are shaky, especially the crosshatching. also you should use a smaller marker for lines that are inside the figure, or draw bigger.
