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pic related is what i think you should improve on, but i’m not a professional so take this advice with a grain of salt.
you should consider looking up videos on how to use markers, those helped me a bit.
when coloring skin tones, i would always look up artists i liked on instagram and copy how they colored for practice.
my art looked a lot like this when i first started out, i think you have a lot of potential! keep drawing, anon!