>>3700483Really awful composition. There's no real focal point - just a bunch of random bits of interest awkwardly placed around the composition.
The angle of the front figures legs is ridiculous - it almost creates a tangent where the left and right legs could be interchangeable. I can't unsee how the little white strap could be their waist, and you have some bizarre extended torso connecting it to the rest of the body. The left leg is just sticking straight out in a way that is disjointed from the rest of the body. It is absolutely jarring and contributes to how 'still' and devoid of movement it seems.
Is the figure in mid-air, or stepping on that piece of machinery? It's impossible to tell because of the poor separation of space.
Is the figures arm on fire, and are they getting hit by something? Or is that fire & debris from the tank exploding in the back?
How is there an explosion large enough to send that tank flying upwards in the back, but to not affect the unarmored blue-haired woman (?) right next to it? Wouldn't she be blown the fuck out? Actually - how far away is that? There's a terrible separation between the midground and the background.
