>>3639726You're trying to create a world for your story? Some of it is quite tacky, maybe critique of copying western culture or just cultural diffusion due to phyles and density a la Diamond Age.
>>3639727gesture is nice here
>>3639731no tether, do these people even do anything or is it representation of spirits or something? would be nice if mall cops rappelled down the roof.
>>3639736Snow Crash
globe is unnecessary
>>3639767Johnny Mnemonic from Mirrorshades
>>3639769You look over your shoulder, not turn your whole torso (ouch)
>>3639780>>3639786these are the best, fa will like it
>>3639827>>3639825>>3639824>>3639821These have a nice narrative. We discovered ancient alien evil artifacts -- hold on you mean like Alien? ancient evil -- hold on you mean like Halo? -- We discovered artifacts, -- hold on is this a metaphor for ching chong cultureSHUT UP YES IT'S LIKE HALO
