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What is /ALT/?
If you're looking for a place to post your cartooning then you've found the right general. This is /ic/s 1st and only merged hub where both Eastern and Western stylization can coexist peacefully, hence the double title. However, by community demand and long history, this is favorably an Anime general.
>Rules & Guidelines
(1) Any form of cartooning is welcome; so submit and receive feedback from others. (2) Please resize your images before posting. (3) Share your knowledge and (4) Remember to not be afraid of asking for critique. Most importantly I encourage you to keep discussion at a civil level, but you're more than welcome to share your opinions.
>I came for anime. Why does the image OP say cartoons general?
To distinguish from the anime study thread (janitor supported). Please post your studies there and personal work goes here.
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>Community Resources
Hitokaku Index
>http://www.asahi-net.or.jp/~zm5s-nkmr/
List of active livestreams
>Use twitch #art
>yoshikadu2011 https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCUx5dpO6d5gQ4KWNPc24CKw
FellowBro's Book Collection
>http://mediafire.com/?i44dwzkf9j9n8
Tutorial & Reference Collection
>http://pinterest.com/characterdesigh/
Japanese Tutorials & Documentary
>http://www.pixiv.net/member_illust.php?id=59317 (0033)
>http://iradukai.com/
References
>http://www.onairvideo.com/croquis-cafe-photos2.html
>http://www.eggazyoutatsu.net/eng/atarichan.html
>http://senshistock.com/sketch/
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>>3893937 do some line drawings with that pencil - Charcoal or the Noire?
>>3896179 Love the details in the back
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>>3896719 >>3896807 Glad to see you making so much progress, keep it up anon
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Tanaka U flash tutorial ref
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Drew this mostly as a test to tweak a brush pen-like brush I made on Painter. Added some glitch effects to it because why not?
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>>3895225 aren't the legs too long?
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>>3896920 Thanks! I wish I could've gotten more in depth but fine detailing doesn't work on my sketchbook.
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I'm trying not to use filters, but everything looks so bad
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>>3897675 it must be suffering to be at your level, anon. keep going though, you'll get there... i think
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>>3892502 can u draw something like this but with european faces/women not being racist im just curious to see what it would look lik
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>>3897685 was her boobs and torso intentionally draw to seem as a second face
looks like squidward
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>>3897698 Thanks it’s supposed to be squidward
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>>3897698 “Hey buddy how’s it going”
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>>3892502 It looks like you’re trying to highlight each individual strand and doing it with pure white on top of that, which gives it that slimy look like
>>3892517 mentioned. Notice how in pic related this chick’s hair has blocks of lighter values where the light hits it? Figure out where your light source is and do your highlights in blocks/shapes. Also instead of white, take your base hair color and shift it brighter so your highlights aren’t too bright. Try studying pics of real hair with this in mind to make your drawings more convincing, it’ll get you closer to that sexier hair you want.
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Hardstones McFlintcock !!HyUHIeKB6fW
Hardstones McFlintcock !!HyUHIeKB6fW
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Angel !!b54Js4RqEVd
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>>3897793 her torso looks like a separate body than her lower half.
This one the shoulders and head look like they're sliding away from her body. Overall I think you should zoom out more when drawing. individual details look fine but zoomed out the bodies look uncomfortably skewed.
Angel !!b54Js4RqEVd
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>>3897796 meant to link this post for the shoulders comment
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>>3897797 really cute monkey girl
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It's supposed to be android 18
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>cant into anatomy >cant into perspective just fuck my wife senpai
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>>3897937 i am nod a good artist but i try to help u fren!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! does it look better? is she supposed 2 be floatign
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>>3897957 thanks, perspective is more clear.
as for if shes floating or not, i don't really know. i guess another problem i have is i don't plan ahead so i just put every part of the body in a random position and call it a pose. sucks cause i have all these cool poses in mind for male characters, but when i draw women my mind always goes blank and i unconsciously end up drawing more or less the same pose in the same perspective over and over
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>>3898004 >i don't plan ahead so i just put every part of the body in a random position and call it a pose i do this too! let's try to not do that from now on!
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>>3893082 Mega that shit senpai
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>>3897898 You picked a more difficult perspective which makes for good practice, also nice job having the hands doing stuff.
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>>3890538 The way you’ve drawn the cloak kinda hides the contour of their body, makes it look like their torso is missing. I was gonna do a redline but I think the anatomy is mostly ok.
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>>3899243 You gave her 4 boobs
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>>3899245 >iq high enough to understand tits>ass >iq too low to understand how to draw tits aaaaaaaaaaaa
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>>3899198 Nice.
>>3898750 Thanks, I’ll keep that in mind if I go back to that picture
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Someone make a new thread
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Can't tell if this is too muted
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>>3899717 Or if this is too saturated. I draw on a laptop, but for finishing up things I move it over to the pc.(can't tell which monitor is more accurate)
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Could anyone spare me a critique or even a red line? Putting characters in environments (and drawing environments in general) is absolutely my weakest point. I want to get the perspective and everything else as best as I can before moving on.
Here's a link to the psd if it's easier:
https://www.mediafire.com/file/yv7uov4cyaiveg9/help.psd/file Anonymous