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Anonymous Mon 10 Dec 08:56:00 2018 No.3715038 View Reply Original Report

Quoted By: >>3737568 >>3738540

>Animation Thread Discord

https://discord.gg/Ju9NuWN

>Books, Basic Program Tutorials etc.

https://mega.nz/#F!M8s0XYjB!mo_9uNAKJUnVD3Ne9X9vgg (NEW)
https://mega.co.nz/#F!3p8CwQZD!DR2mC-kw0TyQQ8Uw3T6JYg

>Reference Material

http://www.referencereference.com/
https://vimeo.com/groups/aniref
https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCRvspTjApofA2Yg3i10gTdQ
http://www.rhinohouse.com/

Anime .gif/.webm repository

https://sakugabooru.com/post

http://www.animatorisland.com/51-great-animation-exercises-to-master/

Stoyboard & composition: http://www.floobynooby.com/comp1.html

Play Youtube videos frame-by-frame

http://rowvid.com/
or just pause the video and use the , and . keys (This doesn't always work but worth a try)

Kinovea video file frame-by-frame analysis
https://www.kinovea.org/

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Anonymous Sun 23 Dec 2018 08:53:20 No.3732780 Report

Quoted By: >>3735045

what happened to the animation anon who was animating the tuba girl... I miss them

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Anonymous Sun 23 Dec 2018 10:32:17 No.3732882 Report

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hlo

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Anonymous Sun 23 Dec 2018 20:02:47 No.3733475 Report

Quoted By: >>3733609

is it bad if i use copyrighted music for an animation when i dont make any money off of it? i wanna post it on youtube, i dont care for ad revenue i just wouldn't want it taken down. and ofc ill credit the artist

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 23 Dec 2018 21:18:37 No.3733609 Report

Quoted By: >>3733613

>>3733475
depends on the artist usually. if you dont rack a million views per video, i wouldnt worry

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Anonymous Sun 23 Dec 2018 21:28:00 No.3733613 Report

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>>3733609
i see, thanks anon!

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Anonymous Sun 23 Dec 2018 22:46:48 No.3733730 Report

Quoted By: >>3734123 >>3735125

My first (rough) attempt at a fight scene, done with mouse and firealpaca

Anonymous

Anonymous Mon 24 Dec 2018 05:45:02 No.3734123 Report

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>>3733730
i cant really tell whats going on

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Anonymous Mon 24 Dec 2018 07:20:50 No.3734197 Report

Quoted By: >>3735484

Just testing a concept here.

Anonymous

Anonymous Mon 24 Dec 2018 23:52:27 No.3735045 Report

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>>3732780
died of old age before finishing it

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 25 Dec 2018 01:46:19 No.3735125 Report

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>>3733730
Why would you animate with a mouse and in fire alpaca? Are you a third worlder or just some kid?

If you're gonna seriously animate then get real please.

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 25 Dec 2018 11:56:03 No.3735484 Report

Quoted By: >>3735507

>>3734197
Too slow and too constant, but the idea is great

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 25 Dec 2018 12:33:04 No.3735507 Report

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>>3735484

Yeah, I had to diagram it first. Now that I've got it down, maybe I can put a little more oomph in the animation.

Glad you like the idea though.

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Anonymous Wed 26 Dec 2018 05:48:06 No.3736371 Report

Quoted By: >>3736449

A ball parabola test

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Anonymous Wed 26 Dec 2018 06:18:44 No.3736409 Report

Quoted By: >>3736419 >>3736441 >>3736447 >>3737304 >>3737781 >>3737903 >>3738344

https://my.mixtape.moe/erjfro.mp4

finished animating this!

Anonymous

Anonymous Wed 26 Dec 2018 06:42:00 No.3736419 Report

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>>3736409
felt a bit chaotic

Anonymous

Anonymous Wed 26 Dec 2018 07:14:01 No.3736441 Report

Quoted By:

>>3736409
Nice job.

Anonymous

Anonymous Wed 26 Dec 2018 07:41:12 No.3736447 Report

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>>3736409
congratulations!

Anonymous

Anonymous Wed 26 Dec 2018 07:43:14 No.3736449 Report

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>>3736371
...what are you testing exactly?
You could've make a classic bouncing ball instead; you would learn more while doing your test.

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Anonymous Wed 26 Dec 2018 17:53:28 No.3736866 Report

Quoted By: >>3738113

My first animation. Super basic stuff, but it felt good to see it in motion.

Mayde !MaydeOSpeg

Mayde !MaydeOSpeg Wed 26 Dec 2018 22:55:39 No.3737304 Report

Quoted By: >>3737561

>>3736409
My only critique for your animation would be for the timing and how you transition from pose to pose. I can tell you're trying to make it really bouncy, and it comes off really appealing, it does actually wind up becoming really chaotic and hard to follow. I think if there was more subtleties in the motions, it would look pretty sweet.
The scene where Bury falls into the soundhole is reeeeaaaally weird. I think it's mostly due to the sudden change of arc. Almost like Bury's mass is pulled into another direction completely. Thinking about how she falls from the top of the screen, assuming she's falling almost perpendicular to the ground; the arc as soon as she gets embedded into the hole of the instrument, her arc should still be continuous in the direction it was moving, thanks to Newton's First Law of Motion.
The arc you used makes Bury's entire arc suddenly bounce away towards the ground with no real resistance. I think what would've been better to keep the mass in mind is if you made the instrument go down suddenly, and hit the girl in the face before bouncing up into it's own subtle arc.
Just spitballing ideas

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Anonymous Thu 27 Dec 2018 00:51:13 No.3737466 Report

Quoted By: >>3737482

>>3715801
How do you produce the line-work effect of each frame slightly wobbling/shaking but never significantly diverging?

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Anonymous Thu 27 Dec 2018 01:02:34 No.3737482 Report

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>>3737466
by tracing each frame

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Anonymous Thu 27 Dec 2018 02:17:31 No.3737561 Report

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>>3737304
I don't doubt it, fren. The action really is too chaotic and it's all so sloppy. I'm well aware of a certain rule of animation, and that's to make sure your audience knows what's going on. To guide their eye, and to not have two things going on at once.

I failed! I'm referring to when beary gets blown up into the sky... Two things going on at once. Bad. That's my biggest personal gripe. Everything else is passable I think. Even the part you're detailing, 'cuz I had to get it to work somehow even though it's a bit of a mess in technical terms

But still, I'm just glad I got it done. I'm gonna wanna work on myself now. To make sure I can do stuff like this faster, so that I can have some more technical skills behind my art.

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Anonymous Thu 27 Dec 2018 02:27:14 No.3737568 Report

Quoted By: >>3737767

>>3715038
first attempt ever in Krita

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Anonymous Thu 27 Dec 2018 02:51:08 No.3737599 Report

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>>3715413
My guess is that's an over expose effect. i assume can be recreated on Clip Studio Paint animation tools by copying an animation folder layer 3 times and giving it exposure effects.

here's something i found on twitter a couple of days ago, yeah its not full animation so don't start.

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Anonymous Thu 27 Dec 2018 02:59:18 No.3737606 Report

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>>3722580
On Clips Studio Paint you have to create a 2D camera folder and drop all the other animation folder/cels/files there to have em being affected by it, by default CSP has some momentum of delay during the panning, but there's two options.

You can change the momentum of the keyframes on the Graph Editor section of the Timeline and when rendering the final animation, on a GIF image file or an actual video, make sure to set it up at 24fps

cont.....

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Anonymous Thu 27 Dec 2018 06:21:33 No.3737767 Report

Quoted By: >>3738126

>>3737568
Did you have to use the extension to convert it to GIF?

Anonymous

Anonymous Thu 27 Dec 2018 06:35:29 No.3737781 Report

Quoted By:

>>3736409
gosh dang this turned out real great

Anonymous

Anonymous Thu 27 Dec 2018 09:05:39 No.3737903 Report

Quoted By:

>>3736409
Very cute. Add sound.

Anonymous

Anonymous Thu 27 Dec 2018 13:38:34 No.3738113 Report

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>>3736866
The upper body looks mostly fine, but there is no transition for the legs from a sideways-back view to a front view. The legs suddenly swap sides like they're teleporting.

Anonymous

Anonymous Thu 27 Dec 2018 13:51:46 No.3738126 Report

Quoted By:

>>3737767
Yes
Otherwise it export every frame as a separated image

Anonymous

Anonymous Thu 27 Dec 2018 18:04:24 No.3738344 Report

Quoted By:

>>3736409
You showed so much of it that it feels like I finished a big project even tough I didn't do shit
Nice

Anonymous

Anonymous Thu 27 Dec 2018 20:40:34 No.3738540 Report

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>>3715038
This is great but wouldn't it be better if he landed on the other foot first when he comes to a stop at the end?
Though I'm not sure, like this it has a bit of a sudden stop which is the point of the gesture. But in my head it'd make more sense the other way.
The leg and arms are synced and this looks really good, am I just stupid? I don't know what I'm saying.

>>3715801
It bothers me how the arm pops out at a 90 degree angle even though he doesn't stick it in at that angle.

>>3717990
top kek

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Anonymous Fri 28 Dec 2018 05:43:41 No.3739256 Report

Quoted By: >>3741611 >>3742294

still WIP

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Anonymous Sat 29 Dec 2018 18:49:29 No.3741467 Report

Quoted By: >>3741921

how to animate like the japan animation does? I mean they have this small lines that's so crisps.

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Anonymous Sat 29 Dec 2018 21:02:19 No.3741611 Report

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>>3739256
Sorry for the lack of critique, but very noice.

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Anonymous Sun 30 Dec 2018 00:47:04 No.3741921 Report

Quoted By: >>3743367

>>3741467
you mean like the line quality? just draw using a thin pen or change the pen thickness depending on if its traditional or digital.

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Anonymous Sun 30 Dec 2018 04:01:44 No.3742141 Report

Quoted By: >>3742175

I don't like this that much because I don't know how to cut in inbetweens within TVPaint.

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Anonymous Sun 30 Dec 2018 04:29:33 No.3742175 Report

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>>3742141
lookin' for true love wherever I go.

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Anonymous Sun 30 Dec 2018 06:00:47 No.3742294 Report

Quoted By: >>3742371

>>3739256
Getting top marge feeling from the ginger babys turn

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Anonymous Sun 30 Dec 2018 07:44:02 No.3742371 Report

Quoted By: >>3742383

>>3742294
Hmm I might have to slow the turn down, add some steps in or something

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 30 Dec 2018 08:02:58 No.3742383 Report

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>>3742371
Yeah, It's gonna be really cool though!

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Anonymous Sun 30 Dec 2018 21:15:50 No.3743320 Report

Quoted By: >>3743358

A little animation I'm currently working on and my first post on this board, I hope anyone who sees this could give me some feedback, thanks.

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 30 Dec 2018 21:32:26 No.3743358 Report

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>>3743320
i like it, i think you should add more shadows/highlights to give some depth since you don't have outlines. the color of the car also blends in too much with the desert, just change the value of the car or desert to better contrast it. i dig the style overall

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Anonymous Sun 30 Dec 2018 21:35:51 No.3743367 Report

Quoted By: >>3743393

>>3741921
It would be the case for doing illustrations, but I'm talking about animation. It would be a tedious pain to colour that thin pen. My process usually starts with alpha pen (jagged lines) so the coloring will be much easier. Pic related as an example of the thin and crisp line that I was talking about.
https://youtu.be/bvYxaNVsTWQ
Around 11:13 , that's how I colour with aliased lines before final post processing of anti-aliasing them. I want to achieve the crisp look instead of the weighted line that a typical tumblrite animation has.

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 30 Dec 2018 21:48:15 No.3743393 Report

Quoted By: >>3743430

>>3743367
i mean they're still using a thinner pen regardless, it's a matter of how they're coloring/rendering is where the problem lies. i'd imagine they're either exporting at a very high resolution so the thin lines show up crisp and not jagged, or maybe they have some render settings in whatever program they're using that works. but as long as you can render at 4k, those lines should be pretty crisp. it's totally doable with your method, it's how nearly every studio does it.

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Anonymous Sun 30 Dec 2018 22:00:40 No.3743430 Report

Quoted By: >>3743439

>>3743393
what program that has this adjustable thin stroke? Currently I'm using Animate.

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Anonymous Sun 30 Dec 2018 22:07:14 No.3743439 Report

Quoted By: >>3743444

>>3743430
i use toonboom which can probably get close, but like tvpaint and clip studio can definitely get it. i feel like animate could get it though, what render settings are you using when you try exporting with thin lines?

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Anonymous Sun 30 Dec 2018 22:10:27 No.3743444 Report

Quoted By: >>3743452

>>3743439
the default setting as mov/mp4, and post process on AE.

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Anonymous Sun 30 Dec 2018 22:19:04 No.3743452 Report

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>>3743444
idk if animate can but id recommend exporting as a png sequence if possible, i always get weird issues when exporting raw data as mp4 but maybe thats just me. regardless, up your resolution to at least 4k if it's not already. even with exporting as mp4, you should be getting pretty crisp lines since the jagged pixels will become nonexistent with such a high resolution, at least in theory, ive never used animate. maybe try asking on the adobe forums if this isnt helpful, i think most people here use clip studio, tvpaint, etc.

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