>>81726242Damn, no, I won't say "never." Just good luck. Even if you double-tease again, I'm glad to see you stretching out.
Seriously. You're doing 3/4 perspectives from outside the car, back-seat views, dashcam views, and it's all great. The characters are consistent barring the times you break profile for good reason.
I like the subject matter. Nick wants to huff a velveteen rabbit snuff box. Velveteen rabbit wants some scarlet fever. The car is ... probably the fire from "Velveteen Rabbit", I don't know. You're making this shit Real.
You've drawn me into the tete-at-tete, too. Nick went from surprised to sly to ravenously horny at all the right beats with Judy taking counterpoint. You've got this shit, man.
Double-tease or full blown, you're taking this places.
Signed, that one faggot.