Do yourself a favor and don't read it. It bastardised basically every character: Kaworu shows up for like 10 pages, says to Shinji he's worthy of being hated and Shinji eats him with Eva01 to gain Angel Powers; Rei tries to dye her hair orange or something dropping paint on herself and repeats Asuka's lines to try to gain Shinji's attention and then hangs herself when she's unsuccesful. Shinji is just your average protagonist who "finally got some balls" as many readers like to put it, and later fucks Asuka. Their child was a Deus Ex Machina or something later to save her, and it ended up being Lilith or something in the end (?).
Many others character do retarded shit as well, but those are the ones that stand out the most for me to remember it after the passage of the years. Not even Asuka's in character. Is dogshit only appreciated for LAS shippers with low standards. Not even some Asukafags actually like that doujin.
The all-ages version still has Shinji and Asuka getting it on for one week trying to imitate Misato and Kaji in college and all of the other weird shit. >>3127591
It's in all of those "how to watch Eva" charts, which is embarrassing. But western fandom is obsessed with LAS, what else is new.