First of all, you should've picked something better too. The quality of the attacched image has any effect to the soundness of your argument unless you make a point about it, which you do.
Second, just because a plethora of talentless hacks manages to ppublish some volumes of their shit stories that doesn't mean that everyone should just lower their expectations.
Third point, Naruto up until the chuunin exam was written well. It had consistent themes and good world building. Things that Mha fails at. The theme of hard work and willpower trumping talent is thrown in the garbage in the first chapter when Deku decides to work hard only once he is promised the best quirk around. But Hori tries to make a point out of it again and again like it was relevant, like in the Shoto//Deku fight. That is even the main underlying them of Deku's rivalry with Bakugou.
If you think MHA's only problem is the pacing you're out of your mind.