>>188623545>with candy that came
I'm okay with the past tense, but wouldn't removing the comma make it sound like it's just the candy that's coming out? I mean, it's obvious from the context, but I still wanted to keep the two parts separated.>she went from treating him like a villain to her lord after getting a gift>she's acting cute on purpose to get shit
It's supposed to be somewhere in the middle, like she's only acting cute because he gives her stuff. "easily swayed" kinda works, except I don't think it fits with the last line, which takes a little jab at that attitude of hers, since being only after your own interest is an adult thing to do.